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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you going to update your fic now that it's finally on the new site?
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the entire story this evening and all I can say is WOW! That was really hot. You have a couple mistakes here and there, but nothing big. Hope you can update soon.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, cool. I might use a couple of things, and turn them around a bit. Thanx.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When are we going to see ch.8? I can't wait!!!!!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't wait till next chapter! I think I might have to do something now. ;)
(p.s. I was thinking about making my own Dawn/Willow and/or Tara/Spike fic kinda like this. Is that ok?)
(p.s. I was thinking about making my own Dawn/Willow and/or Tara/Spike fic kinda like this. Is that ok?)
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
absolUTley LOVE the storyy~~ i knd of wish it was a little bit different everytime dawn touches ..it seems like shes doing the same routine again and again over all GREAT
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Didn't you leave the door open for major kinkiness[and the opportunity for some delicious dirty talk].Here's a suggestion: now might be a good time to recount how Tara got initiated.She could tel Dawn that her first was one of her high school teachers. She began tutoring Tara at her house and they became close and things happened. That'a how Tara became so kinky. She could tell Dawn the things they did from oral sex to fisting to anal to toilet games[no.1 AND no.2]. This should get Dawn all worked up.Just some thoughts. Great stuff, keep it coming!!!!!!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the girls are teaching Dawn lots of new things.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Very hot and erotic. You also have a good concept of the characters and their reactions and rationalizations. Keep up the good work, and am looking forward to the next Chapter
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oy! I did not see THAT coming. Tara is also a kinky girl! Lol! Not that thrilled with idea of the water sports thing, but you pushed one of my buttons with Dawn in stockings. Ohhhh! The mental image of Dawn running around the house in just stockings and high heels... More, please? I am loving this sexy and yet strangely innocent story of yours.