rate_review Reviews

I agree with the last reviewer - I'd love to see this continued, and I'd love to see Xander teaching Dawn about sex with guys.

omg yes! please continue - I'd love to see dawn and some more anal action - possibly with xander? she does like boys too, and probably gets curious...

Yes, restart this story immediately.

Please continue. This is one of the few PWPs I read that sticks out from the rest. I hope to see a new chapter soon.

I love your story. I've always found Willow hot and Tara's pretty hot too. I totally would make out with both Amber Benson and Alyson Hannigan in a heartbeat lol. I can't wait to read the next one!

geeez... i seriously luv this story. Awesome job! Please keep writing. its cool how u went through so many kinks. sooo, more please?

oh and by the way...i would sooooooo luv to hear more about that buffy-fantasys dawnie mentioned

Really enjoying this. cannot wait to read more. please hurry up and post more.

Great story-More please!

please continue this story A.S.A.P.!!!!! i love the foundation, and the subject matter, and did i mention u picked a hell of a cast. the character/plot development is really great, which makes for a much more interesting read. as far as your future chapters go, please keep the flowing frequently, and continuously. and please don't be shy about continuing dawn's gradually increasing path of kinkyness. i noticed the subtle hint in the last chapter alluding to dawn's fantasies about buffy, and other cast members. no reason in my mind that when she's done with tara, and willow, she can't move on to the others as well, not that i'm in a hurry for her to be done with tara, and willow. i really enjoyed reading the story so far. i looked forward to the rest. my compliments to the author