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Although some of the content and events was obviously disturbing and difficult, I really liked this fic. I admit to giving up on your other multi-chapter fic on this site because it got a little too weird for me, but this one worked well and had a sense of truth running through it. I think I liked it slightly more back when the focus was Faith and Joyce rather than Buffy, but it still comfortably held my interest through to the end.

Wouldn't mind a sequel, in fact ;).

Really outstanding fic. Although parts were a bit hard to read [Buffy and her Dad, etc] this was an incredible tale.
CB

i love this story can`t wait 4 the last chapter so i can read the rest cause what i`ve read of it so far is bloody great.

hhmmm... *frowns* I don't know if I should praise or freak out!!

One thing though.. it is very well good written.

GodDAMN!!! This is getting better and better, I can't wait to see which way this story is going to! Can't wait to see those bastards get caught or get what they deserve!

Sorry.. wanted to review sooner but.... between work and the upcoming holidays.. I simply don't have time to go online *sighs sadly* gotta work these bones and still... (I don't think I'll make the new year with money in my pocket 'specially with a little girl in tha house)

Anyway enough of that! you're going GREAT so keep it up! And just in case I don't get another chance Merry Xmas and a great start for 2007.

oh yay! Finally, getting them back together! I'm excited to see where you take this next.

Only complaint - don't try so hard to make them sound like buffyverse speech - in the last section (chapter 19 or whatever), there was a paragraph that included "vague that up" right after another Buffy-speech thing, and it sounded awkward and forced. Let it come naturally, because the story really is strong enough in many instances to stand on its own.

Goddess multipass.. That icest relationship in this fic is just so fucking disgusting *shudders* so very wrong and as a matter of fact the ONE of the things I dislike in this fic errr... the other one being rape!

And that guy.. whas his name...? ah Giles..? is such a SLIME he just makes me sick *makes puking noises* (you have that character so very great done.. WOW!) here's one..... WAY TO GO DAWN! LOVED that phone call *chuckles devilishly*

Anyway dispite some of the desgusting things going on in this fic... gotta give it you though it's damn well written *nods* , it's funny, romantic, it's got some dark paches here and there, cliffie and let me not forget ANGSTY and all the other goodies *chuckles* but above everything.. THIS is one HELL of a story every chapter leaves you wanting MORE *sighs contently*


PS:About Joyce, HOW can one woman be so dense? FUCK!! *meant sarcastic*

Well damn Kit (pointing above) you're right!!!

But you know what.. that's just it! "Daddy" has the girl all FUCKED UP! and this makes me wonder for how long has the bastard been fucking her??!

My bet is it's been going on for a LONG, LONG while now... we'll just have to wait and see/read *chuckles* what the author to treat us to.

Too multipass... AWESOME story plz keep it coming, you're doing REALLY great!

GREAT 19th chapter *smiles* keep it up!

So I was really excited to find more of this story on here (I started reading it on livejournal - i'm kgola on LJ), and I really love most of what you've done (as I'm sure you rememeber).

The one thing I've noticed that's been bugging me is that the character of Buffy seems very inconsistent - she goes back and forth between being someone I can't stand and being someone I feel bad for, except that I usually then wind up not liking her more when i feel bad for her. She's like one person when she sees Hank (and shortly after) and someone else entirely the rest of the time - unless "Daddy" comes up in conversation or in her head...

Keep writing, and post again soon!