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for The Right Thing

by jl1980

person TwilightChild
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved the story. It was very engaging, I couldn't stop reading. And I would definately like to read more about this take on their relationship and the odd little family you've made.
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a pleasure following your story until here, and I sincerely hope that, as you promised, you'll make a sequel of this. I'll be looking fordward to it.
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love this chapter. It was so sweet!
I suppose that, as things are developing, it will be onlyone chapter left. Two, if you decide to do an epilogue. Well, I'm waiting impatiently for them!
person MarzBar
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spike came up with the perfect retribution for Cordova.
person MarzBar
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How much longer do we have to wait to torture and kill Cordova? Even if the chips go down, how will Spike get free from the restraints after being so weakened? More soon please.
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I sincerely hope that Spikes has the opportunity to put *all* he has learned with Angelus ans the own Cordova about torture, pain, and mind-breaking. It won't hurt, in addition, 'teaching' the rest of soldiers to torture innocent people.
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are right, half an hour is not enough to make Cordava suffer.
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I mean, where was Cordova trained in torture? I'm pretty sure that even Angelus and Drusilla have to learn from her.
person MarzBar
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Half an hour may not be enough to make Cordova suffer but how long does Spike have to suffer again to get that time to torture the beast?
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Buffy. And, what is it that Spike can *sense* Buffy?