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by hellsraven

person jgoodman
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, please update soon
person WIWU
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*poke* Update soon please?! x3 I luuuuuuuuuuurve your fan fic and I'm dying to know what happens next!*addicted*
person Angel
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story.. keep up the good work
person NewJay
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!!!! I can't wait for more!!!
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Nice chapter, tough I think you skipped to update a chapter between the 5th and the 6th chapters, because Xander suddenly appeared in Sesshoumaru's castle, and we don't know how did it happen.

Apart from that, you're evil, really evil! Kouga and Inuyasha? There'll be even more fights than in Xander&Sesshoumaru's relationships! And I can just imagine Shippo's and Rin's "ideas" to help them realize their feelings...

Davinci (or Venus)
person addie mae
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's like the story is missing onw or two chapters between 5 and 6 please piece together
person ranni
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic... but i think you made a booboo.... cause chapter 5 and chapter 6 seem to skip a whole lot from eachother... did you post the wrong chappie first.... cause chapter five ends with xander just meeting the ryu-kitsune leader of the pact.. and chapter six already had xander at sesshomaru's place.. Did you make a mistake?
person ran
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh... the confrontation uo next neh? Hope to see a new chapter soon!
person ran
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome i can't wait to see more... so hurry it up please!!!
person VenusOfHeaven
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You still have me waiting here for first impressions! Nice chapter, I love Rin!