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by BeautifulSinnocence

person Paigie
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I read it a while go and I'm glad to see you're updating again. Keep up the great and slightly morbid work.
person tsh
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great update. I'm sensing Willow did this to get the Chosen Two to work out their problems, but I don't think she expected this to happen.
person tazlife
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it please update soon please i'm begging.
person Daphoenix
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm kinda disturbed by some of the imagery but I'm still intrigued. Post more.
person Fred
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHERE'S THE FREAKIN UPDATE?!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S BEEN 10 DAYS..........SURE JUST WHEN IT'S GETS GOOD YOU VANISH....THEN AGAIN I SHOULDN'T BE TOO SURPRISED IT WAS WHAT....8 MONTHS FROM ONE CHAPTER TO THE NEXT GEEZ!!
person Daratrazanoff
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keepwriting, great story!
person anon
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HELLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person anon
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
C'mon update already!!....please tell me you are not going to make us wait another 8 months for another update.....C'mon I want to know if Buffy's other "cheek's" get red by Faith slapping them as well!! ;)
person ipod
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome story, cracked me up when all the stuffed animals died lol keep up the awsome work
person kay
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha this is crazy