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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... to tell you the truth words can't even begin to describe the brillance of this story. I overlooked it at first, only bothering to skim through, but at a second glance I found myself enthralled by the story and characters. There was an amazing amount of depth, you seemed to be truly within your element. It was beatifully written and I found myself excited and eager to reach the end. One of the best fanfic's I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
Sequel? Hell yes. Many more if you have it in you. As long as you keep Buffy and Spike together and well, you will be guareented to have at least one majorly dedicated fan.
Sequel? Hell yes. Many more if you have it in you. As long as you keep Buffy and Spike together and well, you will be guareented to have at least one majorly dedicated fan.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh this was so good. im always wary of vamp-buffy fics but this was great!!! and im totaly interested in a sequal.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story! Was a little hesitant with it being a VampireBuffy fic, but I believe you pulled it off very well. A sequel would be read and enjoyed by me, too...so, my vote is yes!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...simply...wow.
Normally, i enjoy a fic vamping fic where Buffy is evil, and find the nicey, soul vamp buffy ones to be dry...but this one was really, really good. First off, the way she handled it by enjoying it...let's face it, if you suddenly had all the vamp powers, you'd enjoy it too. And given the fact that she doesn't brood ala angel,like in alot of fics, wonderful.
I also love Dalton, he is simply to...well...cute. A daddy's boy,if ever there was one.
The only problem was the lack of Oz. I was waiting for him to come and...well...considering it was a sotry with Buffy as a vamp, him making willow a witch/werewolf hybred. But it works the way you did it.
I do hope you do a squeal. One that has several things, such as faith (Let's not make her evil. Instead, it would be real great if she actually liked the wholeSlayer as a vmapire thing, and maybe even pouted that she isn't one.), the comign out of his shell spike (It would be great if he actually wrote Buffy some poetry and she loved it.)and focus on the couples. Personally, I never like stories wher eit is "Oh, big bad is ruling everything, ooo fight him!"
Your story does wha ti like. There is a villian, but we know he will loss. Instead, it focuses on how he will loss, on how all the people come together. Do more of this. Don't fall into teh suqual trap og thinking you have to now have a big bad in te second one and make things horrible. Instead, focus on the cahrecters and how they evolve.
One other thing...the topic of Dawn. Now, I know it would be easy to go the path of, "She is Giles and Joyces' daughter." But everyone does that. Instead, why don't you focus on something different, kill two birds with one stone.
Make it that Buffy and Spike find a young girl that has been attacked by something bad (vampire, wolf, enraged Cookie Monster), and realizing she is dying, and feeling a special pull (coughfatecough), they Sire her. It was great to see a sire and a childe as mates, and see the rechildeing of Dalton...but now we need a true child childe.
Normally, i enjoy a fic vamping fic where Buffy is evil, and find the nicey, soul vamp buffy ones to be dry...but this one was really, really good. First off, the way she handled it by enjoying it...let's face it, if you suddenly had all the vamp powers, you'd enjoy it too. And given the fact that she doesn't brood ala angel,like in alot of fics, wonderful.
I also love Dalton, he is simply to...well...cute. A daddy's boy,if ever there was one.
The only problem was the lack of Oz. I was waiting for him to come and...well...considering it was a sotry with Buffy as a vamp, him making willow a witch/werewolf hybred. But it works the way you did it.
I do hope you do a squeal. One that has several things, such as faith (Let's not make her evil. Instead, it would be real great if she actually liked the wholeSlayer as a vmapire thing, and maybe even pouted that she isn't one.), the comign out of his shell spike (It would be great if he actually wrote Buffy some poetry and she loved it.)and focus on the couples. Personally, I never like stories wher eit is "Oh, big bad is ruling everything, ooo fight him!"
Your story does wha ti like. There is a villian, but we know he will loss. Instead, it focuses on how he will loss, on how all the people come together. Do more of this. Don't fall into teh suqual trap og thinking you have to now have a big bad in te second one and make things horrible. Instead, focus on the cahrecters and how they evolve.
One other thing...the topic of Dawn. Now, I know it would be easy to go the path of, "She is Giles and Joyces' daughter." But everyone does that. Instead, why don't you focus on something different, kill two birds with one stone.
Make it that Buffy and Spike find a young girl that has been attacked by something bad (vampire, wolf, enraged Cookie Monster), and realizing she is dying, and feeling a special pull (coughfatecough), they Sire her. It was great to see a sire and a childe as mates, and see the rechildeing of Dalton...but now we need a true child childe.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it please please please come back with a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!