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for Birthright

by tierran

person MarzBar
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEK cliffie!! Will Ariana bring the Slayer back with her to help William fight for his throne and the elvess? More story please.
person Blazing Fire
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and really helped my bad mood from Christmas. (Long Story). But I had good news today and this just made my mood even better. Thanks
person Blazing Fire
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Spike a long lost prince. Now you have my attention. Keep up the great work. More soon when you can. Happy Holidays.!!!!
person sue
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ariana has onyx eyes, huh? Odd. I would have expected violet.
person Blazing Fire
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. You now offically have me hooked. Great work. Keep it up.
person MarzBar
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see the update and the story progressing. More elves, including Spike now. Who yelled HALT and why? More soon please.
person Blazing Fire
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe how good your story is. I have to say that this is one of the more unique type of fantasies that I have read so far. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see more. PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE update soon.
person MarzBar
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked Chapter Two with the little girl he took with them. I am glad to see Buffy beginning to question her so-called friends who are parasites on her good nature. That note telling her what food to buy is a lot of damn cheek. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Spike a prince from a different dimension? What is his birthright? More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who and what is Ariana and what is giving Spike? That first chapter is a tease.