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for Birthright

by tierran

person Chelley
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a wicked story!!! Elfs? are you mad? i think it would have been a nice touch to have gone further with the Xander clone, some kind of blood link or something but hey, your story. wicked!!!
person Chelley
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story so far.
person MarzBar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for a story with a really fabulous outcome for King William.
person jane
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really sweet ending.
person jane
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh cryptic cliff hanger, much. More more.
person MarzBar
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update!! This is such a great story. I do not understand the bit about the daughter (Buffy's daughter?) so you need to come back soon with more.
person MarzBar
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie! I don't suppose Spike (King William) will throw her ass out of there, even if she deserves it. This Dawn is much better than the whiner in the series. Buffy needed someone besides Spike who could and would tell her the truth about things. Love this story and look forward to more.
person jane
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Super update I'm looking forward to hearing what Buffy has to say.
person Tamara
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your Dawn. Let's keep her!
person janej
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good start I like it.