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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad. a little weird
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very dark but hot as hell. Please continue. ;)
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far. I like the way you've written Faith's voice,as well as how you're alternating POVS. Interested to see where you take this.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark tingles...I'm liking this quite a bit.
Faith's speech inflections make things slightly harder (perhaps just in my current tired frame of mind) to read easily
but overall this piece is very good. Sexy. Dark. Insightful to the way you're portraying the girls.
I really do hope you continue with this fic, I'm highly interested to see how things pan out.
Keep it coming, update soon.
Faith's speech inflections make things slightly harder (perhaps just in my current tired frame of mind) to read easily
but overall this piece is very good. Sexy. Dark. Insightful to the way you're portraying the girls.
I really do hope you continue with this fic, I'm highly interested to see how things pan out.
Keep it coming, update soon.