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for Blood Lines Divided

by kimmac5

person Burnz
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting murder mystery you have here. It is great that all of your characters have theri own agendas. Nice work.
person Spikeslilchit
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've got me hooked!!! I keep looking forward to the next update! Keep up the great work!
person crazy
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I keep trying to guess who the crazy stalker is, cannot wait to see. is it on of the OC's Love it.
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please please more
person laura
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
creepy! i like it...but some of spike's dialogue with joyce was a little stilted/cliche??? I guess if he's significantly older, he might speak to joyce as one adult to another, but i'm picturing him at 19-21, i don't remember how old he is... i like the way willow is guilty for pushing buffy away and how willing oz is to back willow up. i really liked the conversation buffy and spike had in the kitchen...anyway, usually i just say yay or something, but i thought i'd try to be more specific this time...

thanks for writing!
person chanel 5
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic updates. who is this mystery person? I'm thinking someone along the lines of Giles or maybe the Mayor? questions, questions...
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, reposting a lost chapter is ok, but where are the other lost chapters and WHY ISN'T THERE A NEW CHAPTER?
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more updates please, and maybe you could repost the lost chapters? i liked the daily updates, kept me more tuned in with story.
person becca
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* where'd the other chapters go..?
person MarzBar
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even if Spike could save her from her really nasty family, who will save her from the stalker? More story please.