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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well the first chapter was great but i can't get any of the links to work for the second one. ( I thought i saw a note in your 2nd page notes that metion 5 chapters?) Anyway, if you could plz email me a working link @ kriskei@hotmail.com i would love to finish this story. (Promise i'll review when i'm done!) :)
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the link in your note is not working unless your page is just down
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The website doesn't work, so I can't see the whole story.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like, more please.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had a lot of fun reading this, hope I'll see more soon....
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eww this is good please update soon!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I couldn't stop smiling as I read this. I hope ther rest of the chapters are as funny as this one. Good work!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear merciful heavens but this is too funny. I can just see them there fighting like a couple of little boys caught with their hands in the cookie jar. *snicker* But please tell me you haven't given up on your Broken series and how many series of stories do you intend to write. I've only got one series going and that gives me enough headaches without adding more stories lines into the mix. At any rate, update soon please. I don't care which one, both would be good, but just more soon please.