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for Private Dance

by Lynio

person Anon
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really mean leavin it like that you gotta keep writing
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bout time babe!! Thanks for the email by the way that was sweet, so what about this huh? Here we are getting into a hot little fuffy fic and out of the blue, drama!! Gotta love it. Loving your style, you catch them so well. Keep it up top notch work.
person Elle
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read them all, and i have to say that this one was probably the best. Just one tiny thing though, could you please explain to us why you chose to have the hot stripper (Buffy) get attacked by a vampire? I mean, it's fine if you make faith get changed, and Buffy get changed(as overly used a plot line as it is). Just update, ok?
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So awesome. Please, update. :)
person Salim
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? Damn, leaving it there was just plain mean!

Please don't let B get sired or anything, I'm feeling so sorry for Faith right now :(
person Nicky x x
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! How could you, Lynio??? How?? Why??? Damn it, Faith! Get the hell up & save your girl!!! *Sobs* ...

Damn hot, but damn mean! Lovin' it :D Will be back for more.
person kay
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!! omg! hot and cliffhangery
person greens
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome jobs-I love aa your B/F fics. Please continue & let B live...