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for Private Dance

by Lynio

person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 3. It was great ....... really Hot. I'll review again as soon as i read more. Keep up the great work!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read chap 5. Another excellent chap. VERY HOT TOO!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 4. Even Hotter than 3. You write excellent stories. I will review again later.
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great cliffhanger!!!! ....going to read the other part now. I really like this story/series. Thanks for writing it.
person kay
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
jus been wonderin wen the updates comin along.. no rush ;)
person Lynio
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kay, I'm working on the conclusion, making lots of progress. I think I've just about gotten all the plot stuff worked out. Sorry for taking so long but this is still fairly new for me, can't believe how involved and complicated this Series has become. I have a new appreciation for fic writers that write those epics full of plotty goodness. But I assure you, it'll be worth the wait. ;) Thanks for the gentle reminder. I'm determined to finish this soon. :)
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Michiru Loves Haruka
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! that is one GREAT cliffie I can't wait to read more...

hope you update soon.
person Wicked_Punk-Angel
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my fucking god u have got to continue! And just a little question, how come u don't u just add on to your original story and make all these sequels chapters? Just curious.
person Lynio
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the reviews! Please forgive me for the cliffhanger, didn't mean to get everyone riled up...well, maybe just a little. ;) As for Wicked_Punk-Angel's question, this all started with a PWP (Lap Dance) and somehow it evolved into a series. Never planned for it to go for so long...but it took a life of its own. This installment was finally written after a 9 mos hiatus, so you guys were the lucky ones to not have to wait that long. The conclusion will be forthcoming sooner. :P

-lyn