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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start i cant wait to see wat happens next...update soon
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, write more i want to find out what happens between them. Please!!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great beginning!!!! please don't leave it there. can't wait to see how this story unfolds. update soon please!!!!!!!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start!! I look forward to reading more. Awesome!!! & funny too.!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, I like the stories where they aren't together yet, and kids and all that. You have caught my attention. So, far the diction is good, and you have captured the true personalities of the characters, that is something that some people just can't do. Keep up the good job and update soon..and lots and lots, hahaha
Laytah
Laytah
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo update soon
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. hope you update soon. can't wait to see where you take this.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heehee. This is cute. I like it! Please continue soon