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by elizashaw

person LitGal
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... this is heart-wrenching. This is utterly painful and I'm dying to see this pain healed.
person Angela B
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, fabulous plot, well written and you are a big mean tease. A peak of plot, a flash of back-story, a whimper of pain, leaving us panting for more. Well done, I'm still recovering, and now, now I demand more without wanting complete satisfaction, I like the tease.
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated this. I love this story so much and that last chapter is just heartbreaking. I would've reviewed over on lj, but it's still playing up. There's going to be more soon, right?

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