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by elizashaw

schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story. Please. Am willing to feed carrots to plot bunnies, toss flowery accolades at the feet of Muses and just plain beg the Author, Please. Xander needs Spike, Spike needs Xander and I suspect that Angel needs them both as well.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a magnificent story! I can't believe there aren't more reviews! I wish I could know what happens now! It's been a while since you updated...and you've probably forgotten all about this story but I wanted to let you know that I loved it and you write really well! The characters are spot on, the story's in depth, and best of all it wasn't one of those "Xander's depressed, has sex with Spike, suddenly all bright and cheery again" stories! Thanks for posting this and giving us the oppurtunity to read it! I couldn't put it down but for a half hour when the site was doing it's maintenance thingy!
With Hearts,
Crys
person kriskei
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nooo! grr how come all the really great stories are unfinished? *pout* If i'm good can i get another chapter or two?
person Melissa
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the BEST stories I have had the pleasure of readding(sp?) of far. Please if you don't add to this story than just continue writting. You are a wonderful author.
person JLH
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up with this brilliantly written story. The believable angst filled plot, the beautiful characterisations, the tender moments and gradual - all be it at times brutal - path to healing.

Thank you so much for sharing

J
person asydnes
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just now discovered this story and am quite impressed with it! I love the way that you've been building up to things between Xander and Spike, using plot to its fullest, instead of just a quick sex scene. I'm just one of those readers that isn't so much for PWP as I am for substance in a story, and this one has great substance. Keep up the good work! I look forward to the next installment.

*Mwah*
Dae
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You have to finish this story, this is incredible!
person jessie
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg. Please update. I need to know where this story goes and you've written it so perfectly already. Your characterizations are dead-on (heh). I hereby add my begging to the list -- please update!
person Dancing Rain
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good lord! I hope you're going to update soon? VERY soon? Please? 20 chapters just is NOT enough of this story. I love it would really like to read more. Poor Xander! But my Spike will sort him out, I know he will. So...updating? Soonly? I could beg if it would at all help...
person purrfus
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's almost 1AM and I have to be at work at 8AM. I just had to keep reading. Reaching the end of the last chapter was almost painful. Please update soon.

Thanks