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by Virtualpersonal

person Rox
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah i'm really liking this one, it's extremely well writen. I can't wait to read more in the future.
person Wings
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very entertaining. I like how in character they are, given the situation. Very interesting games. Hope to see more.
person firefoot
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? Besides that that was really hot and write another chapter. Please! Pretty please!
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor xander (kick spike for leaveing him again)
person Elaine
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was anything but boring. Please update again? Pretty Please?
~Elaine
person Hugin
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
person anonymous_fan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn that was hot. excuse me while i pop into the bathroom for a cold shower
person dmalfoy
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil vamp. Very hot. Can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im thinking I ador iadorespike. 'Cause you wrote more. anymore friends of yours have birthdays coming up XD? Anyhoo, awesome.
person Kage
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, definately should be more. :) Keep up the good work.