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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first 4 chaps of your story and i love it!!!! It"s fantastic and also funny. I'll review again after i read some more.
schedule
November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's taken me a while but I finally decided it was time to check out story number two. All I can say is that
I'm very, very glad that I did. Once again I commend you on your abilities as a writer to use the characters in
the best way possible to create a beautiful story.
Initially I'm usually a little wary of other character/Author invented character insertions in a story since they have the potential
to be nothing more than Mary Sues to an alarming degree (although when you think about it, a little of the author goes
into all their characters anyway). There is, however, definitely no sign of that here. Kelly is a beautifully well rounded character
who fits in exceedingly well with the storyline and with the characters of the series we all know and love.
The relationship between her and Buffy is very refreshing to see as it unfolds and I'm particularly enjoying the playfulness between the two,
something you write well as attested to in 'Different Endings'. I'm also enjoying Willow and Tara back where they belong- in each others
arms and past the magical badness. You write loving relationships in a way I like to see them-cute, playful and sexy with a bit of serious :).
The ONLY thing I'm highly disappointed with is that I have hit the end of chapter nine and as yet there is no more forward
button for me to click :). I know though, that will be remedied shortly and so i eagerly await the next instalment of what I know is going to be another
fantastically beautiful piece of fiction.
As always, thank you for writing and please continue to do so :)).
I'm very, very glad that I did. Once again I commend you on your abilities as a writer to use the characters in
the best way possible to create a beautiful story.
Initially I'm usually a little wary of other character/Author invented character insertions in a story since they have the potential
to be nothing more than Mary Sues to an alarming degree (although when you think about it, a little of the author goes
into all their characters anyway). There is, however, definitely no sign of that here. Kelly is a beautifully well rounded character
who fits in exceedingly well with the storyline and with the characters of the series we all know and love.
The relationship between her and Buffy is very refreshing to see as it unfolds and I'm particularly enjoying the playfulness between the two,
something you write well as attested to in 'Different Endings'. I'm also enjoying Willow and Tara back where they belong- in each others
arms and past the magical badness. You write loving relationships in a way I like to see them-cute, playful and sexy with a bit of serious :).
The ONLY thing I'm highly disappointed with is that I have hit the end of chapter nine and as yet there is no more forward
button for me to click :). I know though, that will be remedied shortly and so i eagerly await the next instalment of what I know is going to be another
fantastically beautiful piece of fiction.
As always, thank you for writing and please continue to do so :)).
schedule
November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this so far!!!
It's so great! Can't wait to see more!
It's so great! Can't wait to see more!