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by Kinetickid

person tim
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so that's why it never worked out with her boyfriends. great update
person tim
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see Dawn's reaction to the newest Maclay taming her sister.
person tim
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sounds like Buffy could be in for something exciting. this is probably my favorite of your stories. continue please.
person Poadag
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
could improve.
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!! another update!!!! I'm glad that u were able to update sooner than I thought. AS always keep up the excellent work and i'll b waiting for more when u have it.
person tim
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor xander going to have bruised arms with the amount of times he going to be getting hit. love this story continue soon
person Emanuel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again a nice chapter! The humor is just great fun to read. And did I mention that I love Kelly? She's a great character! The whole sex-talk is getting a little out of hand, but maybe that's just me. It simply seems as if there hasn't been much else going on in the last... say... 3 chapters? Sex, sex-talk, more sex, more talk. At least the chapter ended on a slightly different note, with everybody heading home (for probably more sex) without talking about sex. Even though it's nice to read and you write it in a good way you might want to keep an eye on the balance of emotions-sex-storyline development. Still, nice update to an even better story!
person Emanuel
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yet another chapter posted, story continued and updated - thank you very much! Kelly and Buffy are just too much - I love the way you write them, the humor, the way they act around each other, great stuff! Keep it comin'!
person tim
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's one hell of a wake up call. I can't wait to see what Kelly bought at the leather store.
person Emanuel
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 now, huh? Nice one, even though not much happened - except for some serious play of Parcheesi. Look forward to reading the next chapter!