rate_review Reviews

I love this story only thing i have to say bad about it is that i don't know when the sequel is going to come out hope you get to it soon would love to read it also i would like to say keep up the good work your an exelent writer would really like to see you do a Buffy/Cordy story but thats just me talking. :D

This is a really good story. My one problem is that Buffy and Faith act like they love Tara more than each other. Even Faith who fell in love with Buffy first acts more in love with Tara than Buffy. Also, Tara and Faith are together more than anyone else when Buffy had relationships with both of them first. I just feel that you are leaving Buffy out a little. Other than that, I am really enjoying the story.

This is one freaking great story. A nice plot, great characterization and some really great sex scenes. It just doesn't get much better than this. I so look forward to the next story in this series. Thank you so much for posting this gem for us to read.

I agree her rating nc-17 is accurate for DE & WILA. But the sex is written in an erotic way & the characters feelings for each other only enhance the love making. I checked thee persons profile that decided to report Witch in LA to fanfic.net and the havent wrote a single story. When that person shows me they have the talent & vision to write there own story I may take what they say seriously, but until then why dont u just get a life. keep up the great work kinetic.

:)

this was very beautiful written work...

Definitly NC-17! *fans self rather rapidly*
I can't for the life of me see why someone wouldn't want this piece on their site but lets face it,
some people are just stupid :P. If you dont like, dont read. Simple as that.
Now onto more important matters...Lemme just say...I liked! Quite a bit! (*cough* understatement *cough*)
Several hours of reading some of my fave chars by a very tallented author?...Yeah it doesnt get much better :)
(until ofcourse one mentions the word sequel :D).
Rather than write a long review I'll just leave with one word....
Beautiful.

Tjack,

Re: Rating of kinetic-kid's Different Endings and A Witch In LA.

If your comment to kinetic-kid's stories was in reference to both, I seriously think you should read A Witch In LA again. That story was booted off of FanFiction.net due to content, because of one disgruntled reader, (who happens to belong to this web-site, also), all because he didn't like the way the author writes!! (Took him reading all the way to Chapter 17, before deciding to leave a scathing review, and to bring the content to the attention of the PTB, rather than just not reading it any further.) Needless to say, he's pissed off all the other readers that were enjoying that story.

If the PG, PG-13 rating was meant for Different Endings, all I can say is - it wasn't rated wrongly. They only just got together, give it a chance to move forward. You won't be disappointed. (This story is complete, and kinetic-kid will probably finish posting this week sometime, as time allows.)

As with all of kinetic-kid's stories, give them time, they will eventually get to the posted ratings. Being an avid reader of kinetic-kid's stories, I can tell you k-k has a tendency to torment the characters before allowing them to enjoy!! :)

Hope you continue to enjoy k-k's stories, (there will be more), as they get posted on AFF.net.

Happy reading!!
Cruelly Tortured!!

wow.. beautiful!

Ahh it seems I get the privelage of being your first reviewer...unless I've been usurped
in the last few minutes!
Right, I'm going to start out by thanking you profusely. I have always had a thing for
the Buffy/Tara pairing and there are so few of them around...and I'm completely
obsessed with the Buffy/Faith pairing (I'm not sure obsession is a stong enough word O_o)
so putting all three of them together....[insert dreamy look]...lol all that comes to mind is wow.
So not only thank you for the wonderful pairings but thank you for the nine chapters that have sufficiently
whetted my apitite and left me salivating for (much, much, much, much, much, much...you get the picture) more.
I'd also like to take this time to mention that if you stop writing this, I may have to hunt you down and coax
(by any means nescessary!) the rest out of you! I'm not so sure my sanity would allow this story to be left unfinished
because so far it's fantastic.
I litterally can't wait to see how you handle the trio as a pairing and I have very high hopes. I'm gonna guess Faithy is harboring
feeling still for our little blonde champ (yep I'm increadibly biased there) and falling in love with Tara is just way too easy.
So I'm sensing lots of yummy goodness to come.
Okay I haven't even touched on anything else but unfortunatly for you, I'm prone to long (and often pointless) reviews so we'll leave it there.
I hope it's at least somewhat encouraging for you :).
- Fantastic fic, fantastic pairing, please o please keep going!
(I might also suggest putting this in the fem/fem category as well)

Dear Kid,
I just read all (so far) of Diffrent Endings & A Witch in L.A. and I enjoyed them very much. You have a nice touch with the story and a solid sense of how each character sounds. and I'm eager for the next chapters of both stories.
The closest thing I've got to constructive advice is to think over the NC-17 rating you put on your work. Unless you intend to get a lot more graphic soon, and I'm not saying that would be the best thing for the story, they seem to be more of a PG / PG-13 to me.
Please let me know when more chapters come out.
Thank You, Tjackflash@aol.com