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for Live and Breathe

by Mercy

person maggie
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so love this story would like to read more of it i hope ypo update soon would love to read what happens next thank you great read maggie
person MarzBar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty short and simple. Lots of possibilities for more situations with this threesome.
person MarzBar
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is Willow up to with Spike? Why doesn't Spike just bite Buffy? He would know if she was lying and he would know if the baby was his by the taste. More story please.
person MsSpikester
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just KNEW that was going to happen! Oh, please, make them better...in your own time, though...I can wait.......I think. lol
person MarzBar
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm assuming this is a repost and I see my review was lost too. Anyway, Will Buffy catch Spike in time to stop him from going back to LA? Shouldn't he know to bite her and see if the baby is his? More soon please.
person lil
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U update too slow...but I love it. Keep it up
person MsSpikester
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhh!! You can't end it there! It's gonna drive me crazy!....
No, Really, I get the cliffhanger thing, but it doesn't mean I like it! LOL
More, please
person wildwomen
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope he gets in and talks to buffy before he hears baby news and runs away before finding out its his( I hope it is his) please say i't his
person spikestheman
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With a rebel yell she cried MORE,MORE,MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just loving this Mercy PLEASE update soon...:)
person MarzBar
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. Is it Spike's sprog? Will Kennedy get hurt more?