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for A Witch In LA

by Kinetickid

person yessire
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you made me cry! god i so love the tara/faith combo. you do such great work, thank you.
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay so brilliant story, and i want to applaud you on mentioning sister hazel... they rock and noone i know has ever heard of them so yay for that...
the ending... omg okay so ima sap, i cried... i knew you couldnt leave her dead, no way... so was kinda expecting it but i dont give a shit cuz it was good lol
anyway thank you for hours and hours of fun
love and kisses
sarah xx
person blackie
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:)

thanks for sharing this beautiful written work.
person Shadows of Faith
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Ending I am very impressed
person Nicole
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok completely disregard Anon's review. This was a great story from begining to end. And while your method of bringing Tara back was different then what I thought you were going to do, *I thought you were going to do like they did on the show with spike and just bring her back* It was still good. I love that no matter what Tara's soul found her way back to Faith. And when you think about it that way it makes sense since you made sure it was known about their connection and the fact that they were soulmates. Good job. Do another? Not a sequel, but the same pairing.
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Overall good story little disappointed in ending. What made this story so good was the slayer/witch dynamic. Without that it's just another b/f story. And don't understand the need to change the character's appearance. A new name new face but same person....will be to difficult to connect with.
person Arasashi
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg so very very good! i was worried that tara was just gonna stay dead for a while there lol. oooohhh are you gonna write a sequel?
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, Applause, Encore--wait, actually, no, I'll just reread it. But well done, this is possibly one of the best stories I've read on here. If there is any possibility, a sequel would be mucho appreciated. Great job. Nice touch with the Slayer addition.
person amanda
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely ending!
sequel...maybe...yes, please?
person Jinx
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would be so erotic to bring Tara back as a ghost (like Spike) and Faith not be able to touch her. Reading about the sexy slayer getting frustrated because she can see her witch but not touch her. Have Tara do a striptease for Faith and Faith masturbates for Tara while she watches her strip.