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I like this story, but I hope that Spike pulls his head out of his ass and joins with Angel and them. I look forward to more.

omg how could u leave it there u evil evil thing u. awesome. Update soon.

I realy like this story cant wait for u to update. I like your newest one as well. good luck and keep writing. kizuna

A really interesting beginning. Hope I'll see more chapters up soon?

I am intrigue by your story idea. I read tons of fan fiction and your story is an original. Not only is their very little Angel/Xander slash, but your idea of Tara and Xander working for Angel plus your idea of them feeling violated to the point they need to leave Sunnydale are both unheard of as far as I know. I love how you've built up the angst so far. I prefer smut filled happiness myself, but angst is always a part of a great dramatic story because all your readers can identify with it.

I love how Angel is so protective of "his people." And how he threathened Willow. I can wait to read the initial confrontation. Also I dying to discover the other memory spells she put on Xander. Could Willow be secretly evil? She doesn't have to be by far, I like her charecter and even when she was "going through a dark time" as Angel would say, and tried to destroy the world she was surprisingly likeable. But that would also be a new twist.

If you can write a villian that you reader still likes (ex: Pre-chip Spike/Angelus) Then you would definitely have a fic people would enjoy. Can wait fr your next update.

cool i like! I look forward to more