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for Out Of Memory, Loss

by pixel2817

schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I always hate when I re-read this story and realize there isn't any more. Someday, please, maybe?
person Katie
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story had me hooked can't wait to read more please update again soon.
person karolynn
schedule July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This might be worse than when Willow went 'Darth Willow' on everyone. She has been systematically controlling everyone for years. It's like she was some evil puppeteer, forcing everyone to dance on her strings. It was spooky how she just isolated Tara and Xander from all help by telling a few lies. After all, sweet lovable Willow would never do anything to hurt her friends! Creepy! This was a pretty good story. I'm sorry that it was never finished.
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
arg. i want more. i want so much more. please keep writing. i was really enjoying this. i think the flashback stuff could have been handled a bit better, personally, but it's not bad. i'm just feeling it's dragged on a while. breaking it up would have made it more interesting. but keep writing, please!!~
person Ailsam
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story with so much empathy in the writing. I know you wrote it a wee while ago but is there any chance of you completing it; I really want to see Xander and Tara healed and whole again. You have made the situation feel real so that I care about the characters - brilliant! A really rare talent.
person morganna
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing concept - all this from a plot bunny. I love evil, spoiled, manipulitive Willow. Please write more.
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More soon please!!!
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Evil Willow was actually a nice touch. I normally don't like evil Willow but this one worked for me. Wish you would keep updating.
person Christy
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story so far, and I look forward to seeing more of it. I can easily see Willow falling down such a dark path.
person asydnes
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another riveting chapter, dear!! I anxiously await the next installment! *hugs*


*Mwah*
Dae