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for Do Right By Me

by Janina

person wildwomen
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dang, hope the office was empty! can he be my boss? please
person Denimm
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Would love to see where you take it.
person spikestheman
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
smoke anyone?...loved this chapter and boy can I work at that office?..let me guess Dru came back and is in the bathroom?,,,cant wait as there is bound to be big drama right?:)
person vsnj
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story. Thanks for the update!
person wildwomen
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like that he is out of control and she is the voice of reason (and flash back to seeing tom crusie jumping on the sofa over katie)
person Emma
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic, very hot. I sense some angst in the future though... that's fine, because we all know they'll end up together, and if they don't, it's just cruel. Anyway, keep going on this one, it's very good.
person maia
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter! don't have time to say more but thank you :)
person Randa
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the rest of the story, but these last 2 (combined) chapters seem a little over the top, and kind of overly dramatized. The rest of the story is great though!
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is bloody marvelous. i can't wait for more! that was so hot. yet at the same time, adorable. more please!
person crazy
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So hot, I feel bad for reading this at work. I kept looking over my sholder hoping nobody was reading what had my attention. this made me shiver.