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for Do Right By Me

by Janina

person MarzBar
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's such a good idea for her to get another job now. The situation between employer and employee needs to remain professional or it cannot continue. Maybe they can figure out a way to be friends now, too. More story please.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sadnessss! more please!
person spikestheman
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I just love it....you are showing the exact problemsthat she will have dating a much older guy...I love older William but he is being quite selfish...aahh the angst... and hey what happened to my Spuffy scene when they made love TWICE...I suppose if you update soon I will forgive you Brat(he he)love it keep it up:)
person MarzBar
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He was a bad, rude man! She is also being Buffy and running away just about as fast as she can. More story please.
person wildwomen
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good for buffy being strong, and we still have two weeeks of office tension.
person maia
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally! i couldn't connect these last few days...well, still well done, especially with the way they feel and react to their new relationship (it's a little overwhelming for her and she tries to remedy it while keeping time for herself, but will he understand?) anyway some great chapters, thank you :)
person Brunettepet
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is well written and I'm enjoying the plot device of their age difference. Buffy has every reason to mistrust their relationship, and her youth and inexperience is being well realized. William is a bit overwhelming - he's rich and smooth, and even though he's genuinely attracted to Buffy, he's not discussing his feelings with her. He may be undermining Buffy's confidence about there being a future for them. The spectre of being caught by Dru has real menace. I'm really enjoying this entertaining tale.
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy hottness! more please!!
person Samolly
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have me on the edge of my seat, afraid they'll get caught!
person MarzBar
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He's doing right by her on many surfaces. Hard to imagine they won't get caught soon. He's being so reckless. More soon please.