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for Do Right By Me

by Janina

person MarzBar
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like this Buffy is from the "moral majority." I hope Spike will be OK.
person Samolly
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I love how your playing the age gap.
person MarzBar
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Pregnancy would certainly add more angst to this. Make it harder to keep her parents and the whole office from knowing about their affair. More please.
person Samolly
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was so perfectly awkward. I love how the 'no protection' conversation played out between William & Buffy. It really showed all the flaws in their relationship and their different perspectives on the relationship. Excellent chapter.
person ddf
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn right--that WAS hot.
person vsnj
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, that was hot.

It sure was. Great chapter.
person MarzBar
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe they haven't been caught! I've worked in plenty of law offices and the amount of prying and gossiping and walking into offices without knocking leaves very little opportunity for the fun Spike and Buffy are having. Oh well, I won't be surprised about plenty of angst ahead. More story please.
person Samolly
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo Hoo! Office sex! They are so going to get caught :) And no condom? Is Buffy on the pill?
person wildwomen
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, good that buffy had some father time, keep up the good work and thankyou for the update.
person slayerspet
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...what else was Dru going to say before Will interuppted her....does dru know Will's feelings for Buffy? I loved the end with Buffy calling him before she went to sleep...and also loved the Gone with the Wind references.