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for Do Right By Me

by Janina

person MarzBar
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Blockhead Buffy is determined to rule the roost. I feel sorry for William.
person MsSpikester
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job keeping the story interesting, but I sure would like to see Drusilla's claws come out (and get trimmed at the same time!)
WTG!
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no! no slipping. slipping is not of the good! lol. love this story :) more please
person slayerspet
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh there it is...the angst with the insecurity...I love it. Will Buffy ease his insecure soul?
person MarzBar
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it doesn't look like Buffy is ready to acknowledge her feelings for William yet. I hope he doesn't go postal because he has a tendency to be possessive. He let Buffy off too easily on her wretched behavior in his office. More story please.
person kendall
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cliffhanger!!!!

loved the chapter. i cannot WAIT for more! :)
person MarzBar
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Anybody who did not know about William and Buffy certainly does now. She is a permanent blockhead and heaven forbid she should tell William she loves him. She has just made a wreck out of his office life and credibility but it's still all about her.
person Samolly
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy postal Buffy! I felt so embarassed for her until I found out Wesley and Angel knew!
person flyer_byer
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
True Buffy style! Love this new chapter =) Keep up the writing!
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bloody brilliant!! more please ;)