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for Do Right By Me

by Janina

person MarzBar
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AARGH! Poor Spike. He's right about Buffy making all the rules; must be bloody frustrating.
person slayerspet
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor, Poor Spike....to have tasted such a fine bird and to now have to refrain....I feel so sorry for him....but glad they are still together.
person Samolly
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, that was so sweet! You have me feeling better about Buffy now.
person slayerspet
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know its fiction when someone has a guy that is as Fantastic as Will! God he is so freakin perfect at times. I know the last review I stated that he could be smothering, and he can be...but damn, its times like this where he is completely redeemed. I wonder if Buffy is gonna get the third degree in the morning? Oh...and I loved how you wrote Buffy and Faith in this chapter. Good Job!
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did like that Spike and Buffy are learning to communicate in this chapter, but the integration of the song was sort of unnecessary. But I hate songfics, so maybe it's just me.
person slayerspet
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew! I was really beginning to worry about those two....now I'm just wondering what kind of sinister plan Buffy has in store for Dru when she goes to the office. I must admit that Spike has been quite smothering...not that its all bad...but I get where Buffy feels overwhelmed.
person slayerspet
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what you may have in store for the girls night out? Will Spike see her there having fun and all, before Buffy gets a chance to explain herself and her feelings toward him...ohh I cant wait!
person MarzBar
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Willow is a good influence on Buffy. It would be nice to see Buffy do right by William.
person MonkeyPirate
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Buffy is so good about making everything all about her. I wonder when Spike will get tired of it.
person Samolly
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Buffy makes me so mad! She needs to wake up and see what a good guy William is and that she can't be a daddy's girl.