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for Do Right By Me

by Janina

person kendall
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter! he totally does have the touch. lol. can't wait for more! you're writing is awesome, and you're so prompt on your updates. :)

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person slayerspet
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I feel for poor Buffy...with the way Will was acting all of a sudden and then with the kiss and just walking away...lolI would be a little more confused now if I was her.
person slayerspet
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huh? Wow, I never saw that coming from Will. Cool.
person flyer_byer
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I think you've developed William so well, and it's so much fun/angst watching as Buffy finally matures! Great decision on Will's part; it speaks well of the lawyer/rational thinker in him - without even reading too much into it (I hope!) you've shown that Will's trying to protect their love/passion for each other and to let Buffy learn to fight for their relationship. Wow, please keep writing - I can't wait until the next chapter.
person Becca
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I hate Buffy. Even now she refuses to see her mistakes and let pride get in her way. I hope William makes her sweat before they get back together.
person Lexis
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I'm starting to think they aren't right for each other. Buffy is so immature I doubt she could handle a relationship with a guy her age let alone William. William is letting Buffy call all the shots and he has no idea where he stands with Buffy (I doubt even Buffy knows) Everyone seems to be telling Buffy that she hasn't done anything wrong when the truth is they are both at fault.
person Samolly
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the twist that Joyce had the affair! Really let's Buffy know that everyting isn't black and white and as it seems.
person slayerspet
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Never would have thought it would have been Joyce...so glad you update regularly!
person BrdGrl
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this lets take a break thing blows up in Buffy's face. It's already started and she is starting to lose William.
person slayerspet
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...that was good! Buffy made some damn fine points. This story is great...damn men and their insecurities!