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for Broken Revenge

by LitGal

person Tisienne
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So thrilled to see a new part of this!

Still all depressed for poor Xan, but entirely pleased that Spike is giving him what he needs and NOT trying to make him be his 'old self' again.

Loved Cordy here, hated Wes. He didn't have to be such a jerk. Then again, I guess he just doesn't know how to deal with this version of Xander, huh?

Dying to know what Spike and Angel were talking about, but I'm guessing we'll be clued to that eventually. LOL

Wonderful job on this; thanks so much for posting it today!

~Tis
person catsim
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this just keeps getting better. How do you do it? Have Xander almost normal, then throw him into a panic attack, and then out again. Thanks, of course, to Spike, and his seemingly bottomless knowledge of how to handle Xander and his slave memories and training. Cordelia was just wonderful, just so her, not thinking about what could happen if she touched Xander, but just doing it. Lovely.

Waiting eagerly for more.

Love ya

Cathy
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been checking almost hourly for this update. How pathetic is that? Another great chapter. I can't wait tell this weekend for the next one.

*pssst* there's a couple typos in this chapter. sorry.
person fairypoet
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaa! Im so glad you are wrting a sequal!! You are my fav Spander author...actually, its your fault i LUVE the pairing. &le sigh&

Keep em coming!!
person E
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this is getting good! Please see to that you update this quickly. I'm feeling kinda desperate for more:)
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I hope they're not going to tell Giles or Angel. Those two are nothing but trouble sometimes. At any rate, great chapter, very hot.
person R
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very harrowing chapter. I love how you create Xander's emotions - they're so raw and believable. I like Xander's dialouge with Spike, too, it's very believable, particularly Spike's references to Dru and poetry and roses.
person TheCharmer
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now, this is an interesting turn of events. I think I can see where you are taking this story and I am intrigued! Are they going to look for the girl? Keep it coming, keep it coming!
person RemityGirl
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH POOR BABY, XANDER!! Horrible things have been done TO him.. yet he blames himself. Hope Spike can help him to see the truth.... and learn to be himself again... as more than just a slave.

Thank you soo much for continuing on in this 'verse. 'Broken' has haunted me for a long time. I glad that we get to be a part of Xander's healing!!
person catsim
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my..God! Just how powerful is this story going to get? Poor, poor Xander. And the woman he was forced to breed with.....oh, I feel so much for her.

Now then, was this Spike's way of getting Xander to let go his anger, I wonder? If so, and I think I'm right, well done, well done indeed.

Now then, on with finding this poor woman and rescuing her! To the batmobile!

Loving this, and you, for writing such powerful words.

Cathy