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for Broken Revenge

by LitGal

person TheShadowCat
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, your stories are addictive and for you not to update for a week is like going without food for a week. I'm feeling better now, but please don't take so long in updating again. Of course I do understand when life gets in the way, but please, you were torturing a little kitty by taking so long.

At any rate, another great chapter. Hope Xander can control himself and not kill Leshar, not that I'd blame him, but might mess things up a bit with finding the mother and all.
person TheCharmer
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I simply love it!!! Leshar at the same auction... This is going to be such an interesting situation. Please continue soon!
person Sara
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Gosh! I so need more! Please update soon!
person fairypoet
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O,O my poor Xander!! OMG please update SOOON!

I have also been reading all of your other fics on your webpage...have you continued working on Basic, part 3? *puppy face eyes* Please!
person fairypoet
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for the update!!

I just have one question...what will Spike do if Xan dies?
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting all weekend for this story to be updated. All Weekend! You hear me? You nearly drove me over the edge with anticipation. Not a very nice thing to do to the kitty.

Ok, that said, another great chapter as always. Glad to see Xander is getting better and his ego is actually reinstating itself. But now Angel knows that they're up to something, why do I have the feeling he's going to try and 'help.'
person dragon
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
words do not exsprese how happy i am to see u writting again...I LUV U & WANNA HAVE UR BABIES!!!!
person R
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the search begins was hot.

The rest of it was very nice, too, especially your portrayal of Xander's emotions when meeting Cordelia and Wesley. It's so realistic.

And Spike is excellent, I love him here!
person satikat
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, I get to the end of chapter 6 and I'm all "yay! xander asked a question!" and all proud of him. YOur story has completely sucked me in. I was so happy to see the sequel begun on lj.
person rngrdead
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bounces... More more more!!!!

Love this chap... Cordy was a real bonus

Thanks so much for sharing!

L
J