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for Broken Revenge

by LitGal

person LazySnake
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are one of my favorite Spander author.
Broken was a beautiful yet disturbing stories. Rape, slavery was never my cup of tea. Still isn't.
But just for you I made an acception because your stories are simply addictive.
^_^
Keep up the good work.
I would love it if you minimise the raping and slavery parts and increase the fluffiness part.
Just a small suggestion. You can forget it if it interrupts your plot or writing style cause I love your stories just to much to make you change it.
Write on.
person rngrdead
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I have tried twice to review for 12 and now the most beautiful chapter.... and the poor love and Spike is so precious in this... just wonderful!!

Each chapter is an utter gift!!

Many thanks
J
person TheShadowCat
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much. You have no idea how much I needed that today. It's been a tiring day and that was just the pick me up I needed. Another wonderful chapter of course and I hope you can update soon.
person TheShadowCat
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupid glitch wiped out your chapters and my last two reviews. At any rate, another wonderful couple of chapters. I can't wait to see Spike have a snit over a fine he doesn't deserve. Update soon please.
person wouldn't-u-like-2-no
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, this was great and all but i think you've streched this series as far as its onna go and beyond! cant wait to get into another series! Love!
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't type straight thanks to that chapter. *shudder* God, that was good. You do wonderful smut. Please, more soon please. And if you must continue with the story as well, then so be it, but more, much more smut would be wonderful.
person rngrdead
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!

Fans self.... wonderfully hotttttt beautiful loving and fabulous as always....

Encore!!

L
J
person Sara
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the fight scene! That was such a great chapter!
I was worried in the beginning, but I'm glad to see everything worked out fine.
Please update soon!
person rngrdead
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh THis was *brilliant* *Brilliant*!!!!

The bastard Leshar... the challenge... Xan's having to watch.... just wonderful ... thank you so much for sharing

More soon please

L
J
person TheShadowCat
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful, wonderful chapter. Something tells me Lashar isn't done causing problems, but first I'm hoping for smut. Lot's of smut. Please, please hurry with the next chapter. This once a week posting is driving me batty.