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for Broken Revenge

by LitGal

person xanderspikefan
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hooray for angel i cn not wait for the next chapter please soon
person TheShadowCat
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now get the next chapter up before I lose my mind wondering what's going to happen next. You're driving the kitty batty you know.

Psst...you changed Dareh's name to Direh a couple times before switching it back.
person Shinoga
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot I love this story. Gets me all pumped up to handle work. I love Xander going all "Screw you and the horse you rode in on." What on earth happened to Spike? He'd never just leave Xander like that. And what about Xander's baby? And how would that demon explain Xander coming from a pair of jerks? So much to think about my head might explode before the next chapter. Please continue.
person Esfinge
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, for heavens sake don't stop there! That's just plain mean ;). Although I know the proper thing to say now would be that it would be nice if Angel or Spike showed up now, I'm not going to say it. I hope Xander gets taken back to the farm. You've kind of enthralled me with this farm of yours, and I'm kind of starting to like Dareh, although I didn't like the fact that his speech about natural selection was so truthful. The human specie are slowly killing it self.
person TheShadowCat
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can I breathe now? Good heavens but that was one powerful chapter. Looks like Xander's healing, had to nearly be hit over the head with a shovel to get him to start controlling his life again, but he's working on it at least.

One little thing. You have Sunshine in the stall with him, but it's Summer that's horny as hell during grooming. Am I confused or did I miss something?
person xanderspikefan
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo 4 xander i hope he does not get caught and he finds spike soon
person Alex
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're evil. Where the fuck is Spike?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woehoe! yay!
person Esfinge
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm probably going to be the only one who says this, but I like the new development. You've created a very interesting society here, with the demons and the slaves, and I'm getting more and more impressed for every chapter I read, seeing the way as your universe is developing and growing. I liked that you gave us some inside view on how the breeding trade works. The reference that they are treated like horses was interesting, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for updating this fast.
person TheShadowCat
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So where the hell is Spike? I'm ready to go kick his butt for Xander, but I'm thinking Leshar had something to do with his disappearance.