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for Broken Revenge

by LitGal

person catsim
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no, what's wrong with Spike. What has Xander done wrong, in Spike's eyes? Oh, please, don't take too long to update this most wonderful fic. Hanging off the edge of the chair, here, and let me tell you, that ain't the most comfortable place to be *g*.

Love ya

Cathy
person Angel
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!!!!!!! I loved Broken and this looks like it will be even better. I can't wait for the next chapters.
person Shinoga
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude I just finished rereading Broken for the 3rd time then I check this site and boom sequel!!!! I like so far and I've been wondering how slave Xander will survive in droopy Xander's world. Willow comparing her treatment as a slave to Xander's is an interesting twist, mostly because that is such a real reaction and so often fanfiction ignores reality. It's a nice change. Well then I'll leave you and hope your muse inspires you to even greater works.
person Esfing
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated!! I'm so happy. Actually, I've been waiting for the sequel for several months now, and I'm so glad that you finally updated ^_^.
person rngrdead
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh *joy*!!!!! I can't wait for this to continue..... wonderful wonderful prose... and such a gift.... thank you

L
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person CammyKat
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Your writing the 2nd one ...I LOVED the first one, think I've read it soo many times!! GAHH yay! *dances*
person catsim
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you're continuing it! Oh, oh, sob. So, so strong a story, I so love it. Poor, poor Xander. So broken, so insane with what happened to him. Only Spike can hold him together, keep him as sane as he can be.

How dare Willow think that she knows what he went through! Huh, how long was she a captive? A week or so? Hmmph. Silly, silly, annoying girl.

And what's with Tara. I get the feeling that her captivity did more damage to her than it ever did to Willow.

Thank you, thank you so much for continuing this story. Love your universe. Can hardly wait until the next chapter.

Love ya

Cathy
person nightengale1824
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have so been looking forward to this. It is wonderful so far. I love the way you portray Xander . When will Willow and Giles get a clue??? I love all of it so far. More real soon please.......nightengale1824
person Tisienne
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always, darlin'...

Loving this just as much as I adored the previous story.

And damn that Willow! Can't she just grasp that Xander isn't the same as the Xander she knew?

Hell, after what he went through, she's lucky he's 'Xander' at all!

*sighs* More soon, I hope...

~Tis
person Fan Girly
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay a new story. i will be obsesing over updats so please as soon as possible while keeping them just as amazing as the last story.