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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this story has been SO amazing. the best part is that I really thought I wouldnt like the sequel. I've read the first story twice or more and I love it- its one of my favorites. But I just wasnt sure were this would go- and it did take me in a hundred directions I'd never seen comming but was beautiful beyond my own imagination. It has a quirkiness to it even in the darkest times so that even when your heart is torn, theres something to make you smile. It's life.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I a finding that I'm not really as absorbed in this fic as the first one. I was rooting for xander throughout the last one but I just dont really care either way in this story (most likely since I dont want him to find that girl and I dont see the big deal about the child [he is after all only an 'animal']) . I'm upset to see that xander has regressed to the mindless puppet (things seemed to have been getting better!) Not sure wether thats because of his capture or being forced to "play" slave.
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your stories, Broken Revenge and the one preceding it, are amazing! I have to be at work tomorrow at 12 pm and here I am finishing your fic at 4:20 am. lol. I really enjoyed them, thank you for taking the time to share.
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A page turner. Couldn't wait to see how it ended but I didn't really want it to end.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I mean, astounding. >.< I almost started to cry at the point where is Xander is taken with Dareh the second time. Don't know why, guess I'm just weird like that. ^.^
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. simply wow, I read the first one awhile back and I had forgot you were going to do a sequal. Recently I was looking over what storys you had and saw this. I got to say that while I absolutly loved the first one, this one is even better. My heart breaks for Trista, but this story is so beatiful and I love how Xander starts to act more as a person in his own right. This story is your best ever, and some day Id love to hear more about Amanda. But even if that never happens I like to say cutos for such an alsome story!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful ending.
Will you write a sequel?
I would like to see Spike in the over protective Dad mode when Amanda has guys knocking on her front door.
^_^
Will you write a sequel?
I would like to see Spike in the over protective Dad mode when Amanda has guys knocking on her front door.
^_^
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter. I like the way you got into Trista's head. Wonderfully written.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an extraordinary end to a beautiful, at times terrifying, and exceptionally well authored story!
Thank you so much! I wish you would write more in this canon but also sense that the boys are happy and we should leave well enough alone...
Blessings and hugs for sharing your talent and creativity
L
J
Thank you so much! I wish you would write more in this canon but also sense that the boys are happy and we should leave well enough alone...
Blessings and hugs for sharing your talent and creativity
L
J
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful end.