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for When Chocolate and Azure Meet

by Crye4Me

person Anon
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please next chapter soon please what happens next
person MLynne
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG - This is great! I hope Spike does something *really* nice to Tony. Poor Xander. Spike will fix him. Please say there will be more!!!
person Tisienne
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just for the record? I HATE Xander's 'father'. Spike needs to either get the chip out or hire a bunch of truly nasty tentacle demons to rape HIM... repeatedly... with each and every tentacle. *sweet smile*

LOVELY start. Made me cringe, not only for poor Xan but for Spike, too. AND Xander's Mum, that poor woman. If she's a drunk in this fic, I definitely understand why. *nods* First abused by the 'experimental program', then married to the asshat who just did that to poor Xander? *growls*

Yes, more must be posted... and QUICKLY! *decisive nod*

BTW... all that *points above* means I like it very much! *grins*

~Tis
person ZANGA
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very promising, but....where's the rest????
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how can u leave it like that that bastard i hope he gets his ass kicked poor xander