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for When Chocolate and Azure Meet

by Crye4Me

person Zee Valentine
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
watever your trouble is, i will wait for your story... quite interesting there at the end...how cruel such an interesting cliffhanger you left us....
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to you getting back into writing. So far I'm enjoying the story and look forward to seeing where it goes.
person zafaran
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've got an intriguing start to this story. Any chance of getting more chapters sometime soon? You've got me interested in finding out if Xander and Spike can make it to a happily-ever-after. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
person Newtype
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a great stroy please by all means continue with the writing of it. I really want to see where this runs.
person firefoot
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start, more please! Keep writing this and update soon! (It's been too long already)
Oh and tell us soon what kind of creature/half-creature Xander is, please! It's driving me crazy!
person Sara
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I wonder what Xander is?
Great story. PLease update soon!
person Katrina
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I look forward to seeing where you take it. Please keep writing.
person Dkf
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'scuse me, but i must "Eeeee~!" :3. Nice'lles. Is Xan a dhampir?
person TheShadowCat
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. You've got a couple typos in there, but nothing major and nothing that detracts from the story. Hope you can update soon.
person Christine
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! I feel so bad for Xander, the poor guy never gets a break! Hopefully Spike can help him out.
I'm definitely looking forward to the progression of this story! It will be cute to see Spike and Xander gain feelings for each other, if they do.
Very intrigued...please post lots more soon!