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by addielogan

person Atterb
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, no, I don't think anyone is going to complain that your chapter was too long! Definitely not.

I'm soooo glad Buffy finally told William the story about Angel! What a bastard. And poor Buffy. But hooray for her telling him she loves him, and the wonderful sex - sorry, love-making - as well :)

Awesome work, keep it up!
person Babi
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Can you stay tonight?" William asked, unable to stand the thought of sleeping alone after what they had just shared.

"I can stay forever," Buffy replied.

William chuckled, holding her tightly. "I can handle forever."

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AWWWWWWWW !!!!! so sweet y cant my boyfriend do that lol !!! lol well awsome still keep updating !!!
person wildwomen
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was wonderful, It made mr cry. loved it.
person kingdomheartsqueen
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs*your story is so sweet. Everytime i read it it calms me. Where did you get the idea for this story? Please do update as soon as you can
person maia
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mind a longer chapter? of course not! all is well...I knew we readers could trust you :)
person wolfspider
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell NO i did not mind longer, that was so great. You brought out so much raw and hurtful emotion that Buffy had been keeping inside for so long. Of course Angel was a total git. I really enjoyed how you handled this part, very well done Addie.
person wickednadine
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::siiiiiiiiiiiigh::
person MarzBar
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice make-up chapter. Maybe William can hurt Angel sometime in the future. More story please.
person Jessie
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I certainly didn't mind the length. Thanks for the update!
person vsnj
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now I just love this payoff chapter! I just loved it! Thanks!