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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay, i'm not liking buffy in this. she's not exactly nice and i don't like the way she is around william. she should try being his friend first and stop trying to get him into bed when she knows he's not used to it. she seems like she would just sleep with him once and then leave, but i hope that's not the case. i liked that she stood up for him, but that wasn't exactly the right way to do it. i do like the story, but i guess i don't like the fact that buffy is acting like a slut.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just love where this is going Addie....thank-you for the great prompt updates:)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's great! I love it! Please write more soon :)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please review. I like! And I like the bewildered Willow too. :)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it. The shopping scene had me laughing out loud, and everything Buffy says is just so hilarious. Also, William makes me crack up with all his prudish language and everything. One thing that bugs me just a little bit is how he keeps worrying what his mother will think of him, but it does add to the character. Great fic, keep it coming!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL I TELL YOU EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cliffhanger woman...lol...that was a nice chapter. Loved William's wet dream about Buffy. Willow giving out advice was priceless. Oh all alone in a big house with William, oh what is a girl to do. SHAG him rotten baby, yeahhhhhhhh
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad sobriety didn't make Buffy abandon our dear boy. I thought he was going to have a coronary in the store good thing he remembered to breathe after the kiss! Good chapter. ;)
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh oh oh oh does the happy dance...I love this story. William so needs to come out of his cage and play. Though I am liking how Buffy is seducing him into a blithering goofball. I like her style. Ummm satin is better,because lace just itches. anyways just my two cents there LOL. Addie I am just loving this story, I can't say that enough. It is just so different. Buffy helping William. Ahhhhhhhhhh MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome stuff so far. The way you write William makes me giggle :D
Keep up the good work!
Hugs,
V.
Keep up the good work!
Hugs,
V.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh... I'd love some more... :-)