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by addielogan

person Vonnie
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I really like this story line for some reason. Keep up the greatness!

Hugs,
V.
person Coquine
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope when you said this was going to be a short fic, you didn't mean TOO short, cause i'm loving this far too much for it to be over anytime soon. The smuttiness is fantastic, and i'm really loving the buffy-as-pseudo-dru-seductress who brings out william's inner sex god. C'est ci bon! It is so good!
person wolfspider
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW What a way to wake up in the morning. DAMN alittle bit of William before breakfast sure would make my day go very well. I really like how you are making this damn great sex,but still putting in their thoughts and feelings. I still like Buffy being the dominering one. great chapter

person jen
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Buffy being the shy one.. very nice touch. The only thing I could find to complain about is the shortness of the chapters... I guess that's a good thing ;)
person wildwomen
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, just found it. and All I can Say Is DAMN that was good. what buffy was doing the him felt like all the cheap tricks guys pull, it was like recreating a few of my first dates.
person HSICDF
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is so hot. I've read like- ALL of your stories.. and they're ALL so hot... but I love the Spike being innocent twist... very... role reversing. write the next chapter! ahh!
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person MarzBar
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! These two could have lots and lots of fun together, not to mention tormenting the snotty kids at school. More of this fun story please.
person faithwills22
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEAASSSSEEEE pleasse please update this fic soon... I love the story line and can't wait to see what happens next between william and buffy... you have definately got a good story line here and you know just how to catch the unsuspecting reader... :)
person tasha
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god that was so hot!!! more more more!!!.....please?
person Wicked
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read this story for the first time, and can I say DAMN!! This story is on fire! -lol- I absolutely love it. At first, I was a bit hesitant, but I like it.