rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to say this was another great chappie. Honestly, after having read your author's note (which apparently many people did not), this story has MORE plot than I was expecting. As far as I'm concerned, there's nothing wrong with a bit of raunch in a story, and I was prepared for it from the beginning. And I really wish people would remember that the concept of writing our own fanFICTION is that we can do whatever the hell we want with the characters, and if you don't like it, you don't have to read it. It's called "suspending your disbelief," people, and they taught it in every freshman english course in the world! Sheesh.

WHAT people don't say "FUCK" I bet Buffy and Spike would of said "fuck" alot on the show if TV was not a monitored thing. I bet the sex would of been hot and erotic too. I like that you are adding alittle emotion and plot here. I mean it's a good thing to see how Buffy is dealing with her parental shit and William coming out of his shell and learning there is more the to the world than his mother.

Great job on this chapter and keep it coming. You did warn us about the "sex" and DAMN you write it well. AGain this is an AU fic is it not??????? AU meaning you go outside the BUFFY and Spike box,but keep them together as a couple. *rolls eyes* I for one and I huge fan of this story and will keep reading till you are done.

by chapter 6 I thought I would see "William becomes Spike", instead I got smut-angst-smut...and that's good all the same :-)
I'm just looking forward to the make over :D
messy

Spike needs the sex to bolster his self confidence. Buffy seriously needs emotional support which it seems like Spike can give her. Love the smut and the talk and look forward to more.

I don't care what anyone says. This fic is the best Spuffy fic I've read in a
while and besides, you update every single day, contrary to other authors, so whatever.
Thanks for updating again. I loved this chapter!

enjoyed the new chapter! i'll follow wherever you will make them go (if I didn't like I wouldn't read, nor comment)

and oops, I didn't read your note before THROWING myself at your story, I understand better now : it's exactly what you said it was going to be
on another note, I finished "been here..." and loved, wouldn't mind seing more! thanks for the rapid updates on your latest story :)

I'm really liking your fic, I think you're doing great.
As for the curse words, come on! It's smut, of course there's curse words!
Can't wait for more!

Eh, don't listen to those complaining. Sounds to me like they have nothing better to do, especially after you already made warnings and such. And there can never be too much use of the word fuck! But that is coming from the girl that says things during normal conversation that would make a sailor blush, lol.
Anyway, I'm really enjoying what you have done so far. I have only seen a couple fics out there that do the very open Buffy and innocent William, and I like where you are taking it. Keep up the greatness!

Hugs,
V.

well, at first (after ch. 5) i thought you resolved the sexual tension issue too fast but now i like it. i think i know where you're going-- (handcuffs, balconey, ect.) looking forward to see where you take this, but i'm here for the ride!