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by addielogan

person Anon
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was wonderful! go Addie :)) more please!
person maia
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! ...and the "makeover session" actually was plausible and sweet : well done!
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh an update!
person XOXO
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although this chapter was NOT filled with sex, it was AWESOME none the less.
I loved the way you portrayed Cecily Underwood's expression towards the NEW William and comtinue to update daily.

- XOXO
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is by far the best fic out of all of them. Please continue!
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! AN UPDATE! Please continue!
person Wolfspider
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh YUMMY YUMMY YUMMY blond tips, tight jeans, tight t-shirt...damn girl you know how to make over a man. I am glad that you went with the tipping and the whole blond. I thought this chapter was great and hysterical. I loved Loren, he was absolutely Fabulous LOL. Laying the smack down on Cecily, that bitch, was fantastic. Now they just have to convince each other that they are meant to be together and are each other's world. MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person jen
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee go william! loved how he blew off Cecily
person clau019
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't even notice there was no smut -ok, maybe I did notice. I'm only human. But hey, Spuffy goodness!! I loved it.
person Lou
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good fun and thanks a million for all your hard work!