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by addielogan

person messy
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally, after a week from hell at work I got around to read all the chapters you posted from Monday to Friday and I gotta say wow! again. In a week time so many things happened between them: it's true when they say that when you're seventeen feelings burn fast. Now, I'll just wait for you to update and in the meantime I wish you Happy Halloween :-)
bye,
messy
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No update in two days?!?! I'm disappointed, but I hope you update soon!
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No update today? Well, I guess I could wait another day. Please keep going. I want more -- I NEED more!
person Michelle
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job. i love your series. i hope you come out with the next part soon.
person MarzBar
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still reading the sex games. I hope they don't get caught and separated by parental-type units.
person wildwomen
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter, and some ideas to file away
person maia
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you were right to call it need : the first thing I do when I have a moment is looking for updates, I'm craving them!...but what will I do when this story is finished? suffice to say I'm not in a hurry to see it end...and I agree with what you said in your note! bye :)
person Burnz
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was a sweet ending to a busy day. If only they could get over their insecurities. Sigh.... Good chapter.
person wolfspider
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmm dominate William coming out, very very very nice. Awwwww he said the words to her while she lay sleeping. That was sweet Loved setting the alarm early for morning sex LOL.
Great chapter as always

person Kristy
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to all the complainers... I think the story rocks. Not really up for the ass sex, but hey, to each their own. But be warned, I will be extremely pissed if Drusilla makes an appearance and snatches Spike away. If that happens, i have a two-by-four and a shovel.....