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This story is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really like this story, but it got me thinking about something else you could write. Perhaps a connected story for Willow and Oz- that is if you want to go on the road of willow not being a lez.

can i just say you write the best sex i have ever read!!! *goes to the cold shower* LOL

Hi,

I have just read ur story and although I don't really like what's happenin at the moment. It's a really good story actually better with the angst involved cos readin them happy all the time although good kinda gets boring cos theres nuthin to make you keep readin. Just wish it wasn't Cecily she'd seen him kiss cos she is a complete bitch. Tho ur story does make it realistic cos you could see buffy and spike both being too scared to go to each other.

Let me just say, firstly, that I adore your stories in general. You had me whimpering for ages while you were writing A Pirate's Life For Me. Baby, It's Cold Outside had me rolling, and The Bad Boy Next Door had my heart wrenching (and it's really a rarity when I actually get THAT emotional from reading fiction). So, firstly as I said, I just wanted to tell you what an amazing writer you are, and how much I look forward to your updates. And with that said -- Need. Holy Hell. I popped in on this story probably an hour after you posted the first chapter, and I've been following it since. The sex? Whoa. Not even I can write sex like that (trust me, I've tried. and failed. miserably. i seem to be limited only to oral for some reason.) The emotions? Amazing. I can definitely feel it. Definitely hate Cecily, the bloody c**t. Actually cried right along with Buffy in Chapter 19. And I've adored William throughout the entire story so far (my fixation will always be on William/Spike. I connect with him the most, as the William persona and the Spike persona).

Now. With all that said? Update faster, or at least as fast as RL permits it, pleeeeeease? :) ;) You rock, chica.

mmmmm......another yummy chapter Addie. this story ROCKS!!!!!!

oh yea...more buffy/wiliam mega-sexapades. damn girl!!! i love the way they are connecting emotionally. Wiliam needs to come clean about seeing the angel thing on buffys notebook. wonder if he will?

Man alive, the lack of communication between these two have reached ridiculous proportions. Cecily saying she not liked but 'loved' William? huh? That came out of left field. I'll keep my fingers crossed for a bit of a reprieve for Buffy and William, those crazy kids. ;)

Just wanted to say i love your story and i hate it when people feel the need to flame a writer, if you don't like it don't read it!! No ones forcing you, and just cause you had a bad day dpn't take it out on someone else lets be honest - no one cares and it's kinda sad! It's soo unnecessary especially when the story is actually pretty ace. Can't wait for updates, loving it muchly. xx

Poor Buffy and Spike. Did Cecily see Buffy and make sure she played smash mouth just in time? I hope somebody pokes William soon because getting together with the bitch will just kill him slowly but surely. This is a great story and I look for updates every day.