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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I love the angst you got building up, lol. Anyway can't wait to read more :)
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! its fantastic. The way you discribed Faith's dream, and how it revealed the images of the night before was great. a tad blury but still revealing all the important stuff... i could really see it happening. I can't wait to see what happens!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!
please update soon!
please update soon!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude... you've so gotta continue this
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey look another chapter! This was good love the dream and your description of it, perfect language use and excellent pacing. Looking forward to more! Soon... very very soon!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start you have here. very interesting situation of having Faith beign the one who doesnt remember. I really want to see where you take this, has a lot of potential for angst and frustration (which i happen to like!) as long as there is some hotness and happy endings thrown in there too! Can't wait, please continue! :o)
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, you have both characters' voices down perfectly. Update soon.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo this is one great story you got here. Keep updating!!!!!!!!!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you better continue this! lol. I like it and you are off to a great start!!!! :)
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. Good first chapter. I'm excited about this story, looks like there is finally somethign worth reading around here!! you know, stories with plot...character development and such... and not a magical dick? ;-)
ANYWAY I'm loving this setup you have, its shuch a relateable situation. Who among us hasnt woken up on that dreaded morning after and been like "what the hell did i do?!" HA! adn if you havent had that happen to you I suppose you just aint living. lol! And that makes the whole thing kind of funny too! which is great. You also have the voices of the characters down great. Which not many people can do. Your Buffy reactions were wonderfuly spot on and your Faith is exactally how i picture her.
I'm looking forward to a lot of angst, and conflict, and humor and sex from you, (uh the story that is) just so ya know girl!
nice start, now show me what you REALLY got! it rocks, update asap!
-poet
ANYWAY I'm loving this setup you have, its shuch a relateable situation. Who among us hasnt woken up on that dreaded morning after and been like "what the hell did i do?!" HA! adn if you havent had that happen to you I suppose you just aint living. lol! And that makes the whole thing kind of funny too! which is great. You also have the voices of the characters down great. Which not many people can do. Your Buffy reactions were wonderfuly spot on and your Faith is exactally how i picture her.
I'm looking forward to a lot of angst, and conflict, and humor and sex from you, (uh the story that is) just so ya know girl!
nice start, now show me what you REALLY got! it rocks, update asap!
-poet