rate_review Reviews

Loved it. Very good characterisation, loved the twist at the end. Only usefull critisism I can think of is the whole whelp thing. C'mon, spike calling xander whelp is like it's own little spander cliche. You don't do it half as much as some authors, but a little creativty always improves things.

Cheers

Haha, I love this. Poor, poor Spike. He tried so hard.

HUMMINA.... guh, bibble. Damn, that was hot!! Really really hot. Teehee, poor Spike; hoist by his own petard. Very appropriate. This fic has now put me in a good mood for the rest of the day! You deserve a treat. How does chocolate frosted sugar cookies sound?

PS-I look forward to what you write in the future, I'll be looking out for you.

Haha, that story was pretty funny. Spike thought he was being oh so clever, but Xander already had him outsmarted from the get go. 1 point for the Xan-Man, 0 for Spike. I wonder if Spike's feelings would have changed from revenge to just wanting to be with Xander after a dream like that?
My favourite line in the story was, "Yet for some odd reason, he hated seeming weak around the whelp." I don't know why, but I find it funny that Spike would be worried about appearing weak in front of Xander.
Awesome story! Would be great if you did more but if not, it was still great.

This fic is awesome! It was very well written, funny and hot to boot. Your playful writing style is very nice to read and your characterizations were very cool. They really gave off the light-hearted and humorous feel and a devious Spike is always a delightful surprise. For your first smutty slash you really did a great job and the result was hot, as for some reason it's very rare to find such well written powerplay between the two. The story works well as a stand alone but the way you ended this fic is just begging for a sequel, and I'm sure we'd all love to read it if you decide to continue.

WOOOHOOOO!!! That was f*cking amazing!!I luved it! The reverse spell! Glorious! Serves Spike right! I love a good Spike/Xander, but this was so much fun to read for when I'm in those I don't-quite-like-Spike right-now moments I have. For a first, you did a wonderful job. ^_~