rate_review Reviews

OH MY GOD FINISH!!!!!!

This story is very interesting. I like how you are staying true to Angelus and Spike's character as well as Xander. But I do wish that they were a little nicer to Xander. I don't know, I just find it a little more pleasant to read if there is a little more of an emotional bond between them. Although, I'm not trying to tell you how to write your own story, just my opinion.
And I feel bad for Xander. Not only is he just a "pet" to Spike and Angelus, now he is getting knifed by some kids who want money. He never does catch the good breaks. I'm very interested in how Spike is going to react to Xander being hurt. Will he be really angry, scared or just upset that someone touched his "pet"?
Please post lots more now! I'm really interested in seeing what is going to happen next.

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!! more soon please

first thought off the top of my head...
Good!
im interested on what kind of vamp you'll make xander. thats what i love about xan vamp fics. some like to writte him cool and sexy. some maniac physco,sometimes regular xan only evil now. or sometimes all of the previuosly mentioned combined.!
so lets have it!

you can not leave it like this more please