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for The Hart of L.A.

by raycheld20

schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but I have to tell you, your story really shouldn't be posted here. It's a great story, but theres no smut or anything else and when I'm looking for great pg rated fics with all plot and no action I generally go to fanfiction.net. But when I'm looking on this sight I want to see porn. So you should probably delete it cause it's kind of frustrating. I do want to say after ranting like that you have a great plot and it is a solid fic. It would do way better on that other site though.
person kmk
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story doesn't really belong on this site, because it is a mild pg rated story. This an adult fan fiction site where stories are hard R-17 to X rated, because of graphic violence, sex and adult themes. You need to move this story to FanFiction.net where a story like this would get more readers and reviews. Good luck with your writing.
person MarzBar
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yuck on Bangel. I hope Spike finds somebody who treats him right. I'll look for the sequel since I worry about him.
person MarzBar
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who is the dark guy wandering around Wolfram & Hart? WTF does Lindsey want? Will there be any answers in the sequels?

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